HAHAHAHA...damn that was good. You better give this poem to that girl and I hope you finish part 4 of Goodbye so maui can leave me the hell alone...

~Matt~

I can relate to this totaly, they tell u not 2 feel that but they don't no how much it hurts and their like really annoying. how r u?

I rly liek that alot good one...xxLISSA

Awesome write!!! take care and stay strong.
-xXx-

This is an awesome poem...i can relate..sorta..but i loved it non the less..awesome...love Joclyn

I like this poem alot and as i read it it made me feel really sad for the person who's life is being described. I hope that isnt your life, and if it is then thats a harsh way to have to live. But at the same time living that way gives you a strong emotion to put into your writing. that's one of the ways to look at having to live a hard life. I love your writing and am going to keep reading all your work.

xo adge

*sighs* i love dis poem:D i hearts it babes!!!

Loveya ::broken.heart::

I wish you...who is the yoy...may I ask? Ok...you don't hev to tell me...I'm just curios...so glad I can finally read your poems agan..:p...well...this is good...seldom see you write a sad one...and this really touches my heart...it's from your heart...I can feel it...

Interisting...

I really like this poem..i can relate a lot to it..keep up the great work...

xoxo ::Empty Inside::

Well, It's a good poem. I liked the ending too much. The last lines are simply awesome.

I read some more of your works and they are nice and positive, atleast most of them. Most of the poems here are just sad poems or love poems. Its nice to hear from a positive thinking guy.

Hey thanks 4 liking my poem "in disguise" Ur poem is so true. I love it. I know how you felt when u wrote this. Its deep