You torn my heart into shreds
let it slip gently through your finger tips
can you see my arms my face the scars left behind of what was done by you
I'll say i fell I'll say its my fault
will you just leave me alone here with my broken soul will you admit to all the pain you caused me ?
will you say its your fault ?
doubt it
you will just scream louder
hit harder
pull faster
and deny more
just leave me here with my broken soul
Na it dont lack nething..i think its so honestly and beautifully said..and a simple and short way...keep writing mate..im looking forward to it!
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plz comment/critic mine too!
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