What if...

by ratchild666   Nov 28, 2005


You are the torch
Lighting my path
Through the merciless fog
While we smile and laugh

But what if I am more amused
And I cant break our wires fused
What if I do laugh too loud
And hold my head too high and proud

You are the thought
In the back of my head
Lifting me up
With the things you said

But what if my words have no effect
They just fall through and dont collect
What if I talk too much or less
And the sentences are such a mess

You are the sight
To make me smile
To clear my mind
For a perfect while

But what if I dont look as good
As beautiful and slimline as I should
What if my eyes dont hold the key
To unlock his feelings towards me

Your are the one
To fill this space
Slowing down
My impossible race

But what if I fail to fit the bill
And the time does not stand still
What if my smile does not get through
And isn't as beautiful as the one on you

What if i like you more than you like me?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashelin

    This is also one of your best poems. I think you and I might have a similar writing style when we right poetry.

    I especialy liked
    "You are the sight
    To make me smile
    To clear my mind
    For a perfect while"

  • 18 years ago

    by x..BeautyInTheBreakdown..x

    Awwww i like this, its reali gd!! n i cn defo relate to it!! lol. brill!! luv sarah x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Everyone has felt like that. Me included, but i wouldn't worry, dont over analyse everything and enjoy.
    I just wish i had someone to feel about like you. I love the way there's one pos, then one neg. SO original.

    Lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by UnspokenDream

    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO it's even unbeleivably better!!!!!! :D nice add-on :P
    [=-Jonny-=]

  • 18 years ago

    by UnspokenDream

    WOOOOOOOOOO Flabergastic stef! very very good ^^
    [=-Jonny-=]