Nice job 5/5 =)

Stef he thinks the world of u! n gr8 poem btw :D x x x x

WOOOOOOOOOO Flabergastic stef! very very good ^^
[=-Jonny-=]

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO it's even unbeleivably better!!!!!! :D nice add-on :P
[=-Jonny-=]

Everyone has felt like that. Me included, but i wouldn't worry, dont over analyse everything and enjoy.
I just wish i had someone to feel about like you. I love the way there's one pos, then one neg. SO original.

Lv A, x

Awwww i like this, its reali gd!! n i cn defo relate to it!! lol. brill!! luv sarah x x x

This is also one of your best poems. I think you and I might have a similar writing style when we right poetry.

I especialy liked
"You are the sight
To make me smile
To clear my mind
For a perfect while"