by myshiningstar14 Nov 28, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Note: **this is not one of my best...so just bear with me but be honest in your ratings and in your comments. All i like about this poem is the mesage..*sigh* It doesnt flow vrry well but yeaa....*** |
by Tripp
I like this, and its solid, despite your thought of it not being one of your best...I agree that at some points it doesnt flow perfectly, but since when have any of my poems? hahah. and yes, the message in this really stands out, and I agree with it. |
I really think you should try to rap....you would do so well in it..i can see it..you write just like one..just like me..im the same way excellent job 5/5 |
by angie A
Great poem loved every minute of it! |
by disazngurllove
This good keep up the good work |
Very nice...honestly...it does flow pretty well...and I love the way you write it...I just can read it out loud..well..very good indeed... |