Though others might disagree with me, my honest opinion is that this is a really good poem. It comes off as a kind of soul searching experince where fear might keep you from doing something. It's real. And that, Lissa, is probably the highest compliment I've ever given about a poem.

Very nice...honestly...it does flow pretty well...and I love the way you write it...I just can read it out loud..well..very good indeed...

This good keep up the good work

marady

Great poem loved every minute of it!

I really think you should try to rap....you would do so well in it..i can see it..you write just like one..just like me..im the same way excellent job 5/5
~The Poet~

I like this, and its solid, despite your thought of it not being one of your best...I agree that at some points it doesnt flow perfectly, but since when have any of my poems? hahah. and yes, the message in this really stands out, and I agree with it.