U ChAnGed Me

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Nov 28, 2005


I look in your eyes
and i can't help but
wonder if what
you are telling me is all lies

since you've come into my life
I've always had a smile on my face
deep down in my heart
i know you can't be replaced

all I've asked for is true love
someone
who treats me like a queen
and when our eyes meet
everything you feel in your heart is seen

you've been there thru the worst
you've been there thru the best
now let us say good night
and let me rest my head on your chest

let tomorrow bring happiness
and a very shiny day
I'm giving you my heart
please don't walk away

you've become a part of me
and without you I'm incomplete
I'll love you forever and
with you I'm trying to be discrete

now I'm always smiling
because I'm living the perfect life
as you put that ring on my finger
I'll say "yes baby, I'll be your wife"

*this one is dedicated to my baby Miguel...i love you baby and don't ever leave my side..this poem should make all my girls happy that i finally found the ONE*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    God your poems make me smile lol they are sooo dang good and sweet and awwww. lol

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey that was really nicely written. keep it up!:)
    i like it!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    Thank you and good poem ...

  • 18 years ago

    by Cecilia

    Hey thanks mami i dont know how to save..but im learning im not on here a lot because im in school but maybe you can help me out a little with this poem thing because i have a lot of poems.....well hit me back and what part of Georgia you from?

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Mama I read this poem yesterday but wasnt able to comment or vote (I was on my way out), but I thought it was sooooooo good. I really like it. And I hope your one isnt his second anymore. You havent told me whats up with his ex. I hope ya Two stay together forever and be loving each other like crazy and have like 10 kids and all of them just like MY daughter (she is a pain in the ass...really really mean and has alot of attitude, but she is soooooo sweet too) lol

    Love you girl and I absolutly think this poem is fantastic.

    ::MELI::

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