I really like it i have the same feelings sometimes people say the same things they never believe me anymore |
My dear!!!... trisha you most definitely have a talent for poetry... its sounding like this is either you.. that bad things are happening to you in your life that you get out by putting down in poems... or you know someone who has a life like this!!! i hope that i am wrong.. but i think i am right... im sorry that life is so hard.. but the way that im trying to look at it is that someone always has it worse... there's always someone out there somewhere that has it worse... and ive been having big problerms iwth depression lately.. so i can understand if you are depressed and sad... my biggest problem is that i havent wanted to feel happuier and "get better" so i havent been... its all about your attitude! that is it! :) its all up to you on how you are going to feel and act... ive learned this from a really awesome guy that i met online, we're like really really close friends.. and he's helping me alot.. just like my boyfriend is... i have sooo much i want to say.. but there isnt the time to say it right now, nor do i have the energy... i hope that we can keep in touch through email because i want to be here for you through all of the problems in your life! as stupid and corny as it sounds.. i have all of this support to give and not a lot of ppl or enough ppl to give it to... and i hope that you will be another one of those few!!!! |
by Michelle
Wow gurl that was powerful, you have a great talent for writing, I hope you keep writing, and I'm really sprry but I know how you feel I was an outcast, and they would say things that you wouldn't believe. |
by NikkiLaC
Oh my god!!! thats one of the best but most depresing poems ive ever read!! kepp up the good work... seriously |
by Liz
Wow Scaredofme i love tihs poem is deep as hel and i was reading about ur off ur page and i know what u mean and i just wanted to drop by and says thanks for the comment it means alot to me thanks Comment back and read some of my other poem too please Comment back-Liz |
by Liz
Wow Scaredofme i love tihs poem is deep as hel and i was reading about ur off ur page and i know what u mean and i just wanted to drop by and says thanks for the comment it means alot to me thanks Comment back and read some of my other poem too please Comment back-Liz |
Woh girl this was a masterpiece! It was depressing but really really great you have talent! Keep it up! ^_^ |
by Live WeLL
Wow... this was a very powerful poem and filled with many emotions.. you have talent and this poem was amazing.. keep writing.. it is def a good way to vent and let some emotions out.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =] |
by Live WeLL
Wow... this was a very powerful poem and filled with many emotions.. you have talent and this poem was amazing.. keep writing.. it is def a good way to vent and let some emotions out.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =] |
Thanks sweetheart. But wow Christ has done so much in my life =) |
by maria
I thought this was a wonderful poem. if u feel that way im sorry to say that i feel the same sometimes and i hope you have friends like the friends i have because even thought i think i might be giving in to depresion i put up the best fight i could thanx to them. have hope...help always comes |