by Samantha Nov 28, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I don't wanna hate you no more, |
by Void
Hey! That was pretty good, I had to read it twice to make sure of things, but I think that's something that makes it well written... Your feelings seem to be a lil bit confused and woundin eachother which is the point of this poem right? well if so then you've accomplished what was needed. Good job :) |