Comments : When im with u

  • 18 years ago

    by disazngurllove

    Hey this really good
    keep on writing

  • 18 years ago

    by beautiful-angel

    I love the way it flows i wish it would never end

  • Thank u baby! no man in this world could possibly be sweeter to me! dragon+kitty=4 ever and ever!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sasha

    Thats really cute I know how you fell!!

  • 18 years ago

    by disazngurllove

    Hey all the poems ive read which are really good but i was wonder it sounds like lyrics do u rap
    keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by evie

    Love ur poem.love always evie

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXKristie MarieXxX

    Hey great JOb keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by A Metaphorical Beauty

    Aww this poem is really sweet. It's how i feel about my b.f when i see him =) x

  • 18 years ago

    by Fluffy

    That was truly a beautiful poem; written effectivley and atmospherically. Well done, and keep writing =)

    Much love and God bless,
    FalLEn*-

  • 18 years ago

    by keirstin

    I like this poem keep doin ur thing.

  • 18 years ago

    by keirstin

    I like this poem keep doin ur thing.

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Aww thats so sweet good luck wit her! i rly enjoyed this poem, nice rhyming sceem. Please read some of my poems: I suggest Come Get Me, Your Beauty, Suicidal Romance, Sw33t Misery, Somebody Please Love Her, Another Round and Your F*-Up Barbie, and whatever else appeals to you. Keep writn, I will read more lata'. XXLISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesika

    I really enjoy this poem. It is very well written. Keep up the excellent work.

  • 18 years ago

    by evie

    I LOVE IT