Meh, its not that long, and as long as its good length doesnt matter, and it is good, so pfft, i liked it, sepereated parents is always a real pain on the kids =( they don't seem to notice very much but it is. thanks for sharing. =)

The time wasn't wasted...it was greatly appreciated... this poem is one of the best I've heard... Check out his mistake...It is the story of my life... great job and keep ur head up

Kayla

Dis is a really gud poem one of the best ive rad in a while u have a real talent xxxxxxx

Great opem hun. its a bit sad though!! keep up the gud work
-court x0x0x

It wz gud, ur right tho it wz a bit long but i still liked it!!! I hav a family lyk that bt it was ma real mum and step-dad........ (commnent on ma poems please!!)

Hey There!!

Like i expected from ur last poem i commented on...u surely have a great talent.
I m so sorry to know abt the way u had ur life so far but then this is what we call life.
Wish i could give more than 5 for this one..great work dear and all the best for ur future

I thought it was great and I gave 5/5. I can relate a bit only because my parents split when I was 2. And I never see my dad. Well I like how you express your feelings in this poem.