by KaYkAy Nov 28, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I wish i could just take your hand |
by Void
I really enjoyed that, it's a dream of my own to do with the one I love. If only it was possible. Anyway, I don't have any complaints about it, except maybe the word 'met' when I'm pretty sure you meant to put 'meet'... which really isnt a poetry matter rather a spelling matter so it doesn't count as a complaint :P. Really nice job :) |
by Michelle
Awwwww...sounds like me, many times... i just sometimes want to run away from my problems, but i can't do this.... don't give up! |