Comments : I dont know anymore

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Aw babe yes lets hope='(
    hun u r amazing, i feel so much through ur words..please htink of everything u'd be leaving behind. Take life one day at a time ok hun?
    i just noticed this mistake:
    "When all Ive know is hard times."
    known?
    just to make it perfect:P
    and also in the last stanza 'there' *they're.
    just observations babe..the poem is awesome
    >torn -x.x.x-

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammikinz

    Loved it......i understand wat ya saying hun...anyways reli greta poem..xx