Aww gooooood poem!!
i cann relate
nicee job very sweet!

Oh my god! I am trying so hard not to cry! It was beautiful! Every writing you submit seems to get better and better. (sometimes...I feel like you were dating the guy I write about! You are that dead-on! It kind of scares me...and worries me! lol!)

Oo wow girl, that's beautiful.

I love the twist, cause I didn't expect it to be over. So that was very surprising, shocking, and emotional.

Very well writin. It flows well with the Where I'd be" comin back all the time. Very well done.

Girl, I'm just sorry to hear this. I know it won't make you feel any better to hear that I feel sorry for you..

Take care hun, hope you will feel better soon, such a lovely sweet girl shouldn't walk through this world on her own..

-xxx- lotsaa love kisses and hugs

Awww i know this feeling all to well, and you put it in words amazingly keep up the good work 5.5

I really like this poem girl, its beautiful and I can tell it came from the heart. Thanks for commenting on my poems.

::MELI::

I love it. my exact thoughts for past while. better to have loved and lost...isnt that the saying? nice flow and rhyme too

SOMETIMES I WONDER WHERE I WOULD BE TOO...5/5

Aww..i loved this poem...every word of it...and i can definately relate to this... GREAT job..! im gonna continue reading some more of your work... 5/5