Comments : Brutal Battle With Love

  • 18 years ago

    by The Spirit of Ash

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    I loved ur poem ! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Love is great, yet it hurts like hell sometimes... Keep you head up and keep writting...It makes it all much better. The best part is looking back and reading it afteru'r over it and you sit there and say..."God that was dumb..." lol

    Kayla
    XOXO

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    I can relate to this poem a lot. Great job! 5/5.

    Tiffany. xox.