Nice poem...thnx for the comment...its too soon for serious relations at this age...no one is serious or plan anything...>_

"No matter how hard I did try"

try changing that line to

"No matter how hard I would try"

ure poem is great tho! 5/5

Hey there...1st i'd like to say thanks for the comment on my poem...it meant alot...2nd i wanted to say that this poem was really good...and some advice...guys are idoits...they come and go...so do friends...life is full of heart breaks and plenty of mistakes...sry to hear about how things are tho'...if you ever need someone to talk to i'll be here listening...you are a good writer...i'll be looking forward to some new ones...well take care...always and forever, Jen

This was awesome, i know you dont know me but i loved this an di think that you are truly blessed at expressing how you feel, Trisha

Beautiful poem! 5/5. Keep writing your really good. I love the way you rymed and the flow in the poem. I can relate to it. And here's something I've always beleived that might help you. 'If it's true love he'll be back'

Very good but be more happy

Hey beautiful poem!
i hope itz not true!
love ya
mel