Hey i love your poem. it feels so true for me too. my dad left me and my family and moved to VA from NY. i never see him at first cause he didnt want to see me now its my choice good job

Thats like exactly how i feel... my dad died last may :-\ thanks for commenting on mine, i apppreciated the feedback!

Wow, This Poem Is Completely Amazing. And One In Which I Can Honestly Relate To. I Lost My Father To Cancer 2 Years Ago.

But You Spelt Know Wrong.... Lol

x0x LoveLustTragedy x0x

Very sad. I kept on getting an image of a little girl crying for her daddy in my head. I loved this one girlie. Great job! 5/5

Stephanie

This one was very touching...i know someone who is grieving for her father to come back...you think...i could give this poem to her under your name? i'd really appreciate it if i had the permission...

Of course u can.... if my poem helps someone else some how, id love to give u permission

So touching. Thank you for sharing.