Ur poem really made me feel good to kno that some 1 feels the same as me!

~Kaitlynn Brown

I can relate to that poem so well..very well written..5/5
keep it up take care
Mel

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Wow...I really dont know what to say. This poem was awesome. Your such a great writer!!! Keep it up. Thanks for reading mine too.

I feel like crying after that poem, because I know that you and I are alike. I wish I could right that well...

Hey buddy, it's been awhile, i don't have a screename anymore but hope your doing good, i am and everythings going good. miss you buddy and always keep writing, i'll check up on you sometime. Good Luck and have fun. Always your freind *Anna*

This poem is a bittersweet poem n like all your other poems i loved it!!!! but sorry to burst ur bubble im here and ur not alone and the girl ur talking about must be pretty stupid to pass up a sweet guy like u!

Very well done, once again. great flow, emotion and depth to this one. effective use of repitition. powerful piece. good job.

Thank You All For Your Support and For Commenting. I Truly Appreciate It and Hope That You Will Continue

This is real good and its true!
but what happends when the girl of you life
comes running back to you?

Wow, really great work!!! loved it!!!!

great how every other stanza ends in the same line!!!!

I love this poem. . I just got over a heart breaking break up and i can totally relate. . I TOTALLY love it!!
Keep the good work up

Ahh! this one i smiled because it was so good...and felt bad because it was sad
haha..mixed feelings

ps.[comment mine?]
:)

This was a truly amazing poem and it made me think of what i've been going through lately!

Keep writing YOU'RE AMAZING!!

Always,
Kristy

Ah great poem i liked fall of god even better 5/5

Wow this poem was amazing. so creative, so hearfelt, yet sad. i loved it. so many different emotions were expressed throughout the whole thing.

Your face would keep me up at night
But now that isn't true
I watched the darkness fade away,
My skies at last are blue.

i would have to say that was my favorite stanza. very deep, and pure. i loved it all. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.