Disappointment

Hey lover!! i know i havent always been there for u and im sorry...but keep ur chin up hun!! i heard in this movie...."mistakes make us fall" and u know why we fall? "so we can learn to pick ourselves back up" me and u have been friends for a long time aaron and i dont plan on that changing..if u ever need a shoulder to cry on or an ear to listen...you've got mine....take care and remember u've always got a place in my heart

xoxox love u,
victoria

Hm, great feeling isnt it? (Kidding around) I know what it feels like to be a disappointment. Having your family always looking down on you as though you are nothing to them..just a big mistake. Although, after awhile I have gotten used to it, I mean there isnt a bright side to that feeling, but you get over it. I have soon learned to not care what they think, and just be the best I possibly can in order to succeed.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 3/5
I would've gaven you a four, but you need to work on flow.

Seasons Greetings!

Omg my parents call me worthless.... I mess up in school to and for a while there I got real bad into drugs because no one believed in me... until one day I met the most incredible person in my life my best friend... If it doesn't kill you it will only make you stronger... hang in there! great poem!

Awww...
aaron,
great poem babes....i can tell you your poems are never a dissapointment...but it shouldn't matter to you what me or anyone else thinks....everyone elses opinions are not the problem....its the fact that you yourself are not happy with who you've become.
forget it if they don't like who u are but if you are not content then that is a problem.
we all fu(k up sometimes...some worse than others...but hey, don't be too hard on yourself. i mean ur 16....you should be able to live your life.
xoxo,
rachel*

Really liked dis hun i know how u feel my poem average kinda talks about the same fings, but ive left home now and it gets so much better!! 5/5 hun xxxxxxxxxxx