God Please Hear My Prayer

by Lu   Nov 29, 2005


Dear God I kneel and pray to you tonight
Hold my dear friend in your arms real tight
Help her through her pain and worry
Please guide her through this sea of fury

Her heart is beaten , tired and worn
She feels alone , unloved and torn
Warm her in your gracious light
Please restore her gift of sight

You hold her life in your hand
So dear Lord , please understand
She is a friend that means so much to me
A kind loving person , is what I see

Please take these tears that I have shed
Mix them with the love you spread
Wash away her pain and sorrow
Let her see a bright , tomorrow

Let her hear your sweet voice speak
Carry her in your arms when she is weak
I ask for you Lord to please hear this prayer
And walk with sweet Nada through this time of despair

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  • 18 years ago

    by neens

    Luanne you are such a wonderful person. That was a beautiful poem. It was so very sincere.
    ~neens~

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    What a sweet and touching poem! Everyone needs a friend like you, fantastic write!

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    I love the way this rhymes. beautiful write for a very special friend. we all love Nada and wish her all the best.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Goody, good, good. a really good poem, full of passion and emotion. the wording was well used. My favorite stanza was the second one, it was absolutely wonderfully written. keep up the good work...i know you will, and i look forward to reading more...so until next time

    Brad

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Luanne,
    If you could only see the tears....I have never read a prayer any more sincere and beautiful in my entire life...You are so talented and I thank God I have had the priviledge of getting to know a heart as beautiful as yours...I know this touched Nada's heart because it truly touched mine...Luanne you're a precious and caring person with a big beautiful heart...I'm proud to call you my friend...AWESOME AND JUST BREATHTAKING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Love ya, Ann

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