by tokish
Excellent poem 5/5 |
Nice poem. Really good job. |
by Bill Turner
Luanne, you are a talented writer and it comes through in each poem, but this one, is most touching. Your heart and soul shine through. Great job. |
by Angie
You have a beautiful heart Luanne. And I do hope that God hears your prayers and also mine for Nada. She is a wonderful, beautiful, loving and caring young lady and has the strength and strong will to help her overcome along with the prayers and help from God. Bless your heart Luanne for such a heartfelt, loving and touching write. Love you bunches. |
by HOLLY ARMER
Beautifully written, Luanne! It is such a touching and love filled piece. I really love the next to last stanza, simply perfection! Take care~Holly |
by Chelsey
Jesus Luanne...I'm bawling Lol..i wasn't even for me...SNIFFLE!...well...*wipes away tear*...you beat me to it, I was on my way to write Nada a poem...yet the Lord a poem too and pray the same prayer..I prayed so hard last night for her and then to come home and read what she said..that she was better...I can't explain how happy I am now!...Wonderful wonderful write mom, this was just...unbeilevable....enough said...GREAT JOB |
by Ann Stareyes
Luanne, |
Goody, good, good. a really good poem, full of passion and emotion. the wording was well used. My favorite stanza was the second one, it was absolutely wonderfully written. keep up the good work...i know you will, and i look forward to reading more...so until next time |
by JJ
I love the way this rhymes. beautiful write for a very special friend. we all love Nada and wish her all the best. |
by Melissa
What a sweet and touching poem! Everyone needs a friend like you, fantastic write! |
by neens
Luanne you are such a wonderful person. That was a beautiful poem. It was so very sincere. |