Breakdown

by lilia   Nov 29, 2005


Today is the day
The day I officially breakdown
When things get too hard
And I fall to the ground

When love seems to have no meaning
And I'm on the verge of leaving
They tell me to be strong
Theres no point in grieving

But how can I be strong
When it all seems so wrong
When I'm broken down
And in the distance I hear our song

All I want to know
Is why you let me down
Broke every hope in me
And shattered my dreams to the ground

Why did I think you were different
You're just another guy
Why did I think we could make it
I guess I just fell for your lies

Now all thats left of me
Is a broken heart
And my only memory of you
Is falling apart

As you slip away
I'm slowly dieing
Losing my mind
And I'm always crying

I'm suffering through all this pain
And you don’t even have a clue
How much you really hurt me
And tore my heart in two

Today is the day
That I officially breakdown
I hang my head to the ground
And cry all night long

Please please please comment, I would really appreciate that. I would be sure to return a favor. Thanks

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  • 16 years ago

    by LovingANDwaiting

    Wow this is a great poem! this is my fave. part!
    When love seems to have no meaning
    And I'm on the verge of leaving
    They tell me to be strong
    Theres no point in grieving

    I sometimes feel this way!

  • 17 years ago

    by luvlydisaster

    Wow.. that was really deep.. it reminds me of what happened to me.. which was recent but im getting throught it with ppl that love me.. but its really good.. and well done.. keep it up..

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h an0ther t0uching and meaningful p0em straight fr0m the heart hun. keep it up

    l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Good poem and great job. I dunno wat to say just that I can expect great poetry from you..... keep in touch!!!

    ::MELI::

  • 19 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Omg..
    You are such an amazing writer. Fabulous job, keep up the great work!!

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