Comments : Breakdown

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    Wow, you did such a great job with this poem...i really like this part
    Now all thats left of me
    Is a broken heart
    And my only memory of you
    Is falling apart

    well done!!!
    luv em

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    I love it and it makes me think of the ppl that I have lost in love and life keep up the great work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by leeanna

    This is soo true you never know people until you really know them you know what im talking about well i know everything will work out for the best cause you are the best person in the world and with the biggest heart i will always try to make you smile and laugh just to know that your at least happy on the outside....luv you forever and ever BFF!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Omg..
    You are such an amazing writer. Fabulous job, keep up the great work!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Good poem and great job. I dunno wat to say just that I can expect great poetry from you..... keep in touch!!!

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h an0ther t0uching and meaningful p0em straight fr0m the heart hun. keep it up

    l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
    d0ra

  • 17 years ago

    by luvlydisaster

    Wow.. that was really deep.. it reminds me of what happened to me.. which was recent but im getting throught it with ppl that love me.. but its really good.. and well done.. keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by LovingANDwaiting

    Wow this is a great poem! this is my fave. part!
    When love seems to have no meaning
    And I'm on the verge of leaving
    They tell me to be strong
    Theres no point in grieving

    I sometimes feel this way!