Hey rik....great poem...its very good...so keep it up!:)
xxx
mez

Would just like to say DAMN! kweenie what else to say :p

Wow, tht was really cool n sorta scary :s hehe. its very good. 5/5 =)
luv becca xx

5/5 Just wanna let you know that I read your poem. Love ya take care and keep it up...you're a great poet Rik.

Good its so good

This poem is brilliant. sort of dark and creepy, but still real and emotitive. I have had expiriance of seing things before, and thinking things that can't be true (not crazy btw-just paranoid lol)

Rik,
thats it speechless wow.
luv always
~jenny~

Good work on this poem. I really like the effort put into it, it has good emotion and flow.

Great job, I love the flow. Keep it up :)

Rik, this is really good. I like how you have the first and last stanza the same. It's really good! I like it! The flow was great and I really like your style! It's very original! Keep up the great work!

~BJ~

Interesting... very inetresting.. teehee good work n_n

Rik can u at least rite one bad poem jks lmao...All the poems u rite have emtion in dem n they r reli reli gwd...
keep it up..u always do though lol
tc mwa luv dia xoxoxo

Wow i really liked it
i couldnt look away
was ausume

5/5

lana