I know exactly what u mean...but don't let it bring u down...thats what they want to do...they want to c u hurt they want to c u cry...they want u to wish to die...but u have to hold ur head up as high as u can....hold in the tears and act as happi as u can...work is the price u pay for everything that u did wrong...u have to wake up in the morinig at seven and they expect u to have a smile on ur face and want u to hug everybody in your site and u just can't do that ...when all u can do is think about ur boy...and what he's doin up behind locked bars....i mean thats just what u be thinkin...
thats all i had to say...
love the poem
love always
PrEcIosa

Um, Your poem needs to be spaced. And perhaps... oh never mind.

Wow... you did such a great job at expressing the stress. I am so sorry that it's that stressful right now, I can't imagine having to go through all of that!! Things will even out eventually though, I promise you. Great poem!

Erm.. i really think that is not ur best poem i dnt even count it as a poem i dnt think it has da point dat a poem shud have dnt know if u undastand me but o well i though 3/5

Its aight but you need work i like it thou keep it up

I like this one alot keep it up lata and god bless 1

Hey i really like this poem. i kinda know how the persons feeling coz even thou im just a causal all the work (like cooking cleaning and serving) gets put onto me while my boss goes hav a smoke or sum shit and u just get sick of it really easy and it stresses soo much!! neways 5/5 keep it up
check out sum of my work if u get the chance
luv ya

My eyes huhrt after reading that but it was an ok poem