Will You Be There For Me?

by End Of Eternity   Nov 29, 2005


If there is an answer
would you share with me?

if you ever know that i am in pain
will your heart pray for me?

if there is a smile on your lips
will you blow a little for me?

if ever there is sorrow
would you just let it kiss me?

if someday we meet again
will you turn away from me?

if somehow i gather courage to call you
will you recognize me?

if you ever think of past
will that past include me?

if i get hold of that knife again
will you bleed for me?

if someday you see my picture in obituary
will you attend my last ceremony?

i know how far our hearts are
but forever you breathe in my memory

God forbid if i am born again
will you be there for me?

** I hate to think about my past but then what else do i have to think about?
I am not depressed but then I wonder why I have so much respect for depression?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    What a touching poem you have written. It brings tears to my eyes.

    if someday we meet again
    will you turn away from me?

    if somehow i gather courage to call you
    will you recognize me?

    if you ever think of past
    will that past include me?

    if i get hold of that knife again
    will you bleed for me?

    We all need to know that their is someone who will be there for us always.
    Excellent writing.
    Take care dost.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Cuts like a knife... but it feels so right! Thats exactly what these questions of yours did to me. Do I need to say anything more?

    Lots of Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Chit Cyn

    The poem cuts deep in the heart and soul of each reader, well versed vividly. Very warm and touching. We, women are so emotional than men and at times they dont see it. The message in this poem was related to the readers so concretely that it took just one reading to understand the thoughts invoked. It doesnt need hardcore, dense literature to make the poem shine, as long as the feelings are drawn and the message flows smoothly for readers of all ages to comprehend, a piece of write is at its finest, a work of progress. The metre, rhymes, syllabication enveloped within, very evident work of an experienced poet. As a whole, structured to perfection... I love your style, free-verse but proportionate in all accounts. U go poetess, u have the thang for poetries. Rated: Excellent urs, in rhythm&rhymes -cynthia
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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    I have no idea wat i meant by simple!?! WAT>! sorry...deliriously tired.
    definately 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Awesome poem Nitin!! omg!! im amazed by this..it's awesome!
    i admire u you're simple..wow!
    take care xoxo

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