Very good makes me think alot about life and the things I have seen and been through with friends and all keep up the good work and I like the one about fate also very good both get 5/5 from me

I loved it... very deep and realistic... many times in life, we have certain feelings gathered up inside, but we don't recognize it--- the deepest feeling is about our past.... this was simply great... I loved the line "If i get hold of that knife again, will you bleed for me?" .... great write... you're truly talented...

Love,
Ipsita

"if i get hold of that knife again
will you bleed for me?"
Like the other comment, I particulary liked this stanza - it kinda hints at the past but still keeps what you are saying the present, giving the whole piece more depth. Nice write :)

Awesome poem Nitin!! omg!! im amazed by this..it's awesome!
i admire u you're simple..wow!
take care xoxo

I have no idea wat i meant by simple!?! WAT>! sorry...deliriously tired.
definately 5.5

The poem cuts deep in the heart and soul of each reader, well versed vividly. Very warm and touching. We, women are so emotional than men and at times they dont see it. The message in this poem was related to the readers so concretely that it took just one reading to understand the thoughts invoked. It doesnt need hardcore, dense literature to make the poem shine, as long as the feelings are drawn and the message flows smoothly for readers of all ages to comprehend, a piece of write is at its finest, a work of progress. The metre, rhymes, syllabication enveloped within, very evident work of an experienced poet. As a whole, structured to perfection... I love your style, free-verse but proportionate in all accounts. U go poetess, u have the thang for poetries. Rated: Excellent urs, in rhythm&rhymes -cynthia
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http://poetrypoem.com/chitcyn (the lighter, sensual side)
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www.poems-and-quotes.com (username: Chit Cyn)
www.poetrycoffeeshop.com (poetry critiques/forum)
www.poetry.com ( poem contest and exhibition)
www.poets.com (poet's workshop)
www.allpoetry.com (username Cia Ang)
www.poemshunter.com (username Cia Ang)

Cuts like a knife... but it feels so right! Thats exactly what these questions of yours did to me. Do I need to say anything more?

Lots of Love
Michelle

Nitin
What a touching poem you have written. It brings tears to my eyes.

if someday we meet again
will you turn away from me?

if somehow i gather courage to call you
will you recognize me?

if you ever think of past
will that past include me?

if i get hold of that knife again
will you bleed for me?

We all need to know that their is someone who will be there for us always.
Excellent writing.
Take care dost.
Love Cindy