Prisoner To My Fate

by End Of Eternity   Nov 29, 2005


In the search of serenity
i was wandering from dusk to dawn
just like a slave to my fate
blindly followed the path to me which was shown

there you were standing on edge to make a fall
just when you were about to break loose
these mountains screamed with me and you heard our call

how i ran to get hold of you?
just how desperate i was?
to stop you from the sin you were about to do

arrested you within my arm
scared but few back steps i took
lost within your charm
just when I had first look

so shocked you still were
if only you could feel my breaths
never would you anymore suffer

as the time kept drifting
i realized the pain you went through
you shared all those things
that made me wonder how anyone could do

like a prayer i heard every word you said
so lost within my own world
never before this wonderful feeling i had

by the time i could realize
the night was over and there was sunrise
by the time i could realize
her spell was all over me, i was hypnotized

like an angel you slept with a smile on your face
wondering if i was playing any role in your dream?
just didn't noticed how you were loosing life's race

its been so many years now
i am still looking at you the way i did before
waiting for you to make a move
as somewhere my heart knows, someday you will for sure

once i was wandering from dusk to dawn
in the search of serenity
just like a prisoner to my fate
i am lost in your eye for eternity

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    What a beautiful poem of love. It is written almost like a fairytale. Wonderful emotions portrayed without this piece.

    once i was wandering from dusk to dawn
    in the search of serenity
    just like a prisoner to my fate
    i am lost in your eye for eternity

    Love your ending.
    Excellent!
    ~CLAP~CLAP~CLAP~
    Take care love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    I think this will be it for today. At this point my mind is not functioning anymore. I'll visit the rest soon.
    Till then... take care
    Lots of Love
    Michelle :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    'just like a prisoner to my fate
    i am lost in your eye for eternity'

    Kahi tum Katarina ki baat to nehi kar rehe the naa? Zinda ..... .....!
    lol... Lovely poem. Sadly romantic, an excellent combination only some one like you can put together. Loved every word of it.

    Lots of Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Again..i meant writing..(so sorry!!!)

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow this is amazing. That is the best love story i have ever read.
    Dont ever stop reading
    xoxox

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