Hey nice poem...it is good so far...hope to read it when it is all the way finished...well take care, jen

That such a good poem. I really like it. But cheer up. Things'll get better. :)

Thats a really good poem. 5/5

I like it, it is sad to take ones life, time heals all wounds even though at times we don't often think so, friends are important in life, find the one that gives trust back be strong

*sad* such an emotional poem... life can be so tough sometimes if not all the time... keep it up