First love

by franky   Nov 29, 2005


I Love you

I ne'er was struck before that hour
With love so sudden and so sweet.
Her face it bloomed like a sweet flower
And stole my heart away complete.

My face turned pale, a deadly pale.
My legs refused to walk away,
And when she looked what could I ail
My life and all seemed turned to clay.

And then my blood rushed to my face
And took my eyesight quite away.
The trees and bushes round the place
Seemed midnight at noonday.

I could not see a single thing,
Words from my eyes did start.
They spoke as chords do from the string,
And blood burnt round my heart.

Are flowers the winter's choice
Is love's bed always snow
She seemed to hear my silent voice
Not love appeals to know.

I never saw so sweet a face
As that I stood before.
My heart has left its dwelling place
And can return no more.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gabbi

    Wow... i am blown away. your poems are incredible. i wouldn't be surprised if you get published some day.

  • 18 years ago

    by JESSICA MARIE COLON

    THAT WAS COOL

  • 18 years ago

    by NiCoLe

    Its really good i like your work xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by JESSICA MARIE COLON

    It was perfect thanks for writing to me (lol)

  • 18 years ago

    by franky

    TAHT WAS GOOD AS IT GETS RIGHT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!! :)-

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