by Ashlee Nov 29, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Ive been lying here for hours wondering what to do |
by Void
Hey! That was really good, eventhough it wasn't set up in format, i could still read it with flow. I do think you should set it up like a poem though, you know indented and fixed for the rhythm. I dont mean to be picky, but I know from experience that presentation is everything. Nice work though!! :) keep it up. |