by Void
Hey, i've seen that alot of ppl have picked their number for this poem, and didnt leave an opinion or helpful thought! lol that's kind of a pet peve of mine so i thought i would leave a comment for you... The reason I think your scores aren't higher though is because, you're asking a question that everyone has asked, and it seems to be only a beginning toa poem rather then a full poem on its own. Maybe you could keep going with it? I myself am quite addicted to love, and saying this, i have no idea what love is... so I can understand your poem pretty easily, and I'd say if you kept going with it you could come up with a master piece. lots of luck :). -stefhy |