by jenniferbmw
Ecellent!! Well done |
Hmm. What a lovely picture. |
I love it!!! Its perfectly written!!! Very creative. Maybe if you get the chance you could take a look at some of mine. Thanks. Great job! |
Wonderful poem very well written |
by Darien
What made this really good, was how random it was. The imagery was great, and the wording awesome. Keep up the good work |
Incredible !!! |
Lovely, Merely Lovely! It had a brilliant picture, and the emotion was perfect! Haha, I crack myself up, thats why its called Picture Perfect ? *chuckles to self* Good job Lad. |
This is a very well written poem, nice and structured, easy to follow ect, Im not big into poems that are repeditive but this one flowed very well 5/5 |
by Alex Marlatt
Bloody hell man you really are good at painting the picture in my mind |
by Hareem
Creative indeed, |
I like it niice description but it seems as if this poem never ends...liek you jsu describe these things and dotn realyl explain it but the description is outrageous...please read as many of my poems as to can..i suggest all of them i will read all of yours eventually if we have a deal..niice jobb keep it upp. |
Wow, this was a very good.powerful discriptive poem, and I really loved it. I would try to pick out some of my favorite lines for you, but honestly I loved the whole thing, with red rivers, rusting trees, fire, sinning saints, ect it is all a piece of art. 5/5 from me. |