Comments : Picture Perfect

  • 18 years ago

    by jenniferbmw

    Ecellent!! Well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Hmm. What a lovely picture.

  • 18 years ago

    by blindedxxbyxxlove

    I love it!!! Its perfectly written!!! Very creative. Maybe if you get the chance you could take a look at some of mine. Thanks. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Wonderful poem very well written

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    What made this really good, was how random it was. The imagery was great, and the wording awesome. Keep up the good work

  • Incredible !!!
    I loved the way it read and your ideas are very imaginative.
    I prefer dark poems, so i like quite a lot of your work !!!
    5/5

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Lovely, Merely Lovely! It had a brilliant picture, and the emotion was perfect! Haha, I crack myself up, thats why its called Picture Perfect ? *chuckles to self* Good job Lad.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    This is a very well written poem, nice and structured, easy to follow ect, Im not big into poems that are repeditive but this one flowed very well 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Bloody hell man you really are good at painting the picture in my mind

  • 18 years ago

    by Hareem

    Creative indeed,
    ...pins...the pillows, it's an enjoyable read.

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I like it niice description but it seems as if this poem never ends...liek you jsu describe these things and dotn realyl explain it but the description is outrageous...please read as many of my poems as to can..i suggest all of them i will read all of yours eventually if we have a deal..niice jobb keep it upp.

    LISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow, this was a very good.powerful discriptive poem, and I really loved it. I would try to pick out some of my favorite lines for you, but honestly I loved the whole thing, with red rivers, rusting trees, fire, sinning saints, ect it is all a piece of art. 5/5 from me.

    -Tainted Mikochan