Dream inside a dream

by Chad   Nov 29, 2005


My mind's the prison,
I'm the inmate.
I'm on death roll,
Because of my hate.

My heart's the guard,
So when I try to escape,
I get trowen against the bars,
And ready for the rape.

My blood's the poison,
They make me drink it,
I try to resist,
But they make me admit.

Now I've died,
And gone to Hell.
And what I saw,
I would never tell.

Satan is killed by an angel,
And He leaves me his crown.
We all know what's needed to be done,
We all chant "bring heaven down."

The war begins,
We are winning.
WE wage for years,
But that's just the beginning.

It's just me and God now.
So he asks why.
I tell him I don't know,
and begin to cry.

I long for death, I tell him.
And he stands there silent.
HE begins to laugh,
And I get violent.

You I worthless, I shout.
Just as weak as I am.
He replies, you don't understand.
You are still a young lamb.

My hand goes straight through his heart,
White blood everywhere.
And I walk away,
Finally out of the nightmare.

A dream that I had...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Cool, Very vilent and cool.

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    LOVE IT...vrrry intense work there. AMAZING. Keep it up.=)

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow! That was crazy, really brilliant though. You really deamt that? Gosh if I did I would be creeped out til ever. Wow. Your discriptions were again birlliant and so was the flow of your writing. I have read a few of your poems now and I am really getting to hear your writer's voice. Excellent poem.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow i love the way you approached that poem...

    LIS

  • 18 years ago

    by Hareem

    Fictive but pretty nice.
    Good poem.