Great poem but no flow relly it was hard to read still good 4/5

Brilliant poem. is difficult to read to start but once you get into it is a great peice.

Nice ending. Leaving something in my mind, very dark and full of intensity.

This poem is somewhat scary...i mean fight with god? but i like the way the words were used. you are good...(^-^)

Wow, i really liked it !
The wording is really good and it's very creepy in parts, well done !!!

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That was amazing Chad.. You have such an amazign talent with making jsut shivers go through you reading your poems.. good job
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Allison

Hm.. that was rather fasinating. I would love for that to happen. :D You're probably thinking I'm a freak.. Ah well. Good job none the less.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5

That's a really good poem. Lots of imagery and emotions. Well written, and thanks for sharing. Awesome job.

It was off with the flow. And the line "You I worthless, I shout." seems to be missing a word like "You are..." Overall diction good and imagery nice. I love the idea it contains though.
~DFTI

Extremely vivid. I kinda liked it. the idea of "A dream I had" was great.

Nice, a bit violent but good I love it when people write what they want despite what others might think good job

Fictive but pretty nice.
Good poem.

Wow i love the way you approached that poem...

LIS

Wow! That was crazy, really brilliant though. You really deamt that? Gosh if I did I would be creeped out til ever. Wow. Your discriptions were again birlliant and so was the flow of your writing. I have read a few of your poems now and I am really getting to hear your writer's voice. Excellent poem.

-Tainted Mikochan

LOVE IT...vrrry intense work there. AMAZING. Keep it up.=)

Lissa

Cool, Very vilent and cool.