I cnt blieve dat came from u steff! u gotta teach meh how 2 rite 1 day. ;)

Hay its good and dark lots of feeling in it cool cool lol my are sad though i have one up but that all im do lol thanx for votin on mine laters

kevin

Deeeeeeeeeeeeep

Its kind of very mysterious & creative too, thats what made me enjoy reading it the most. well done.

Very good poem, its deep and kind of mysterious. there are 1 or 2 lines that dont seem to fit as well as the rest, but that is the only thing i can fault. overall it is a brilliant poem.

Interesting poem
i like how it told a story and the begining of this poem was really nice, everything just seemed to flow togther