Comments : The pain within her soul

  • 18 years ago

    by Liquid Dreams

    That was really good... 5/5 it reminds me of what happened to my best friend...

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Hey thanks for the comment hun..yeh i tried to let him in again, and that just f**cked me up bad again, so i wont..it just hurts!!
    About ur poem...very powerful hun and it holds a lot of truth in how i feel..but that's not right.
    I hope you're ok..
    always here if u ever wana talk xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    After reading 2 of your poems about your friends it sounds like they havent been treating you right. You don't have to listen to me cause this is just some advice I think is good. I think you should just leave them. If your worried about being lonely it's better than being treated so bad. No ones deserves bad friends. You'll meet new people sooner or later and they will be your true friends. I know that from experience and I was the bad friend. And if your friends are like me, then they would relize what they're doing to you and do whatever they can to stop themselves from treating you so bad/

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole Jacobsen

    Again , great work.I know exactly what you're talkin about hun.Perfect understandin. And perfect reasons about how her friends are. Great work. I rated it a *5*.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dolores DLF

    Girl that was so pretty. Keep UR chin up. You will find that friends come plenty but a true friend will stay forever. Good luck. Take Care. Bye

  • 18 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    That Is Such A Gr8 Poem! A True Friend Fills A Place In Your Heart That You Never Knew Was Empty!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bubbles

    Don't give up girl... this poem was amazing.. just remember that what doesn't kill you makes you stronger.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was soo good!!..and dont give up!...i loved this!!...5/5 comment back pleaseee!!