The Magic Inside Us All

by Spirit   Nov 29, 2005


The magic that we're born in
Those great fairy-tales
Of pretty ladies, of fighting men,
And boats with great white sails

The fantasies within our mind
Is searching for a dream
Hoping that we will find
What can not be seen

As long as faith is yearning
For the magic that is there
The fire inside us will stay burning
And hope will not despair

Though believing stops in everyone no matter who you are

The magic inside us will hold on, like the wish upon a star

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Im impressed, this poem is wounderfully descriptive in meaning and imagery. a good write and an enjoyable read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Oh that was a cute poem. :) At first I was wondering why it was in this section but I forgot it’s also the fantasy section which could help explain why. There were a few grammar/punctuation mistakes though.

    The magic that were born in
    Should be: The magic that *we're* born in
    We're as in we are. Not were as in they were there yesterday.

    Those great fairytale
    Should be either: THAT great fairytale
    Or Those great fairyTALES

    The fantasy within our mind
    Now this line I guess you don't have to change but since our means more people I would have mind as plural (minds) but really I suppose you could be saying that we all are one and have the same sort of fantasy. Other than that it was really cute. :) 4.

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