Oh that was a cute poem. :) At first I was wondering why it was in this section but I forgot it’s also the fantasy section which could help explain why. There were a few grammar/punctuation mistakes though.

The magic that were born in
Should be: The magic that *we're* born in
We're as in we are. Not were as in they were there yesterday.

Those great fairytale
Should be either: THAT great fairytale
Or Those great fairyTALES

The fantasy within our mind
Now this line I guess you don't have to change but since our means more people I would have mind as plural (minds) but really I suppose you could be saying that we all are one and have the same sort of fantasy. Other than that it was really cute. :) 4.

Im impressed, this poem is wounderfully descriptive in meaning and imagery. a good write and an enjoyable read.