That was good. i'm here for you if you ever want to talk!

WOW! That poem was....intense. Intense but great. Im so sry for what has happened to you and if you want to ever talk I mean ever...I will be here! Wonderful poem hun. Keep it up and I cant wait to read more
Julie

Very intetnse and dark, u got so much detail into such short stanzas. excellent work.

Ok where to begin... First of all you have a real tallent there. The ability to express your feelings, no matter which feelings you choose to express, is something we don't all have. The preassure created by kept in feelings is what can be catastrophic. You, on the other hand, don't have that. You are able to release and vent. You are able to turn tragedy into creativity. Very sad but an excellent read. I look forward to more to come :)

Yeah i know not everyone has a father...an earth one atleast but we all have God as our father..i dont have a real dad he's gone thanks for your comment

I truly hope your stong sense of being shines for you Jen. I can see a gift that you have hun.. take care.
Geoff