Or keep quite = or keep quiet

out from within= emit the word "out" and just say "from within"

Obviously a newbie poem, and honestly, it's better than I expected of a first poem.

But, I urge you to add punctuation, which is a very important part to poetry.

Other than that, this wasn't the best poem that I've read, it was just okay. The concept of this "great" fire needs a larger, more massive description. You want to entrance the reader, not just... Tell the reader, I s'pose.

Other than that, there isn't much I can think to say, other than good job.

5/5
~Stephen White

When ever
Whenever

Isn't it quiEt?

This should be lowercased since it's not the first word. Unless you have specific reason of course for capitalizing it.

I thought it was a cool poem. I like that you confront that all ages have this anger that can build up. Very true and real. 4.