This is beautifully written

it's very precise

kudos for you!

Hey sweetie,

What a wonderful poem. Such a warm embrace on such a cold winters night.

Very well writin. It flows. Very well done girl.

I'm proud of you :) You are very good.

I love this phrase so much : Im led by passion and haunted by fear ...

Excellent.

Take care hun,
lotsa love kisses and hugsss
-xxx-
Mona

Beautiful... I love it like snowflakes...
Love you hunny

Hehe not recieved my email from these guys yet......you big meany :P lol
well ill be at my best
I actually like this one ignoring what its about
i like the flow and your use of words
Well done my little *munch bunch baby* hehehehehehehehe
ring me tonight we still didnt have our conversation its needs to be sorted im going insane
love you loads sunshine
me

Hey thanku so much 4 commenting on mine it means a lot! im feeling rather sh!t atm n yr thoughts are greatly appreciated!! this is an excellent poem im sorry for whoever you lost
love
XxFeEBeDeExX

Awesome work, everything fits really nicely and I especially liked the start of this, the first couple of lines really show that you are speaking from experience. Nice job.

What a beautiful piece of emotion....
So perfectly capturing how I feel at the moment.... Truely beautiful and magnificent... Lokk at some of mine...

Josh

Very good. i enjoyed your unique writing style and flow.

~David

What a great and emotional poem. 5/5!

Aww, sad poem but very well written
its really good
keep it up
and thanks for the comment on my poem
love Tara

Amazing poem... it touched my soul..