WOW!!! This was written so well Bill.... And Character does come from within...

love ya, Ann

So true...... and quite an inspirational piece......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

My poetry may not be technically pure, but it is always from the heart.

That's a really good poem. It reminds me of a poem we have written in our band's song. In the song, there is a slow beat part, and our singer reads a poem. It's called "Innocence is Everlasting"

Wowzy ...Bill ,
Not your usual love poem ... Where's my fix ? Dang it man LMAO...

No seriously you have done an excellent job on this piece and anything from the heart is worth more to me than hum .... (is it you and I or me and you blah,blah blah )
I am interested in what falls from the heart not whatever it is that (whoever)it was said . If I have to see if this word is right to go with that word then I'm not really saying what is in my heart .....God I hope that person doesn't read my poems ...am I in trouble ....

Anyways Bill great write and now I must go find the love poem ....I'm getting the shakes and need my fix ...LOL

Very well written, i liked it alot. good job.