This poem is fantastic I'm quite surprised nobody has commented on it yet, the flow and word choice are amazing. You really did a fantastic job with this piece, great work 5/5 GG23

What a wonderful job!
I loved how it seemed/if not you where, comparing yourself to a dragon.
I loved the peice. The Word choice was brilliant, and flowed nicely.

Well done,
Elaine.

I loved this...beautifully written and original and unique in concept, and kept me interested throughout.

Despite being relatively short, you managed to put in so much depth and emotion and that isn't always easy to do.

Flow was perfect throughout and the imagery created vivid pictures for me.

I love the ending, I found it to be intense and powerful.

The only thing I didn't like was all the caps. It hurt my eyes.

But other than that, I have no criticism about this piece.

Just...beautiful!

You had me at,

Give My Heart A Great Desire

5/5