So Many Questions

by Barbara   Nov 29, 2005


Hey!! I'm new so I thought I might submit a poem and see what you guys think!! Feedback would be appreciated
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Could you be more than just my friend?
Could we be together to the very end?
Did you ever try to look past the person I pretended to be?
Did you ever want to be with me?

Were you flirting with me or just being a tease?
Why were you being so kind when I was unpleased?
Why did you try so hard to be kind to me?
Why did you change into the person you knew I wanted to see?

Why did you always want to make me laugh?
When I cried, why would you never try to break me in half?
Why didn't it bring you pleasure when I was sad?
Why did you want to make it up to me when you made me mad?

Why can't we love each other for who we are?
Why does love always seem so hard?
How are we supposed to know if we were meant to be?
Why can't love come, at all, easily?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Richard

    Yepp so many questions to love eh arghh yeah 5/5 this was great

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    I liked this one, it was questions, and I've tried to do one that was all questions but I was too lazy to make it rhyme and didn't know how to express my feelings or put them into good words. So I was definately impressed with this piece. nice job:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Good poem, I can relate to this too. Love is hard. BUt what can i say. Good rhyme and flow!

    ~~Sweetie