Comments : Where can I go?

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow hun i LOVED that poem.. Hugs for u:P!!!
    this wa smy fav bit:
    I can't get free from this prison floor,
    chains trip me as I crawl to the door.
    Chains I assembled, these links of stone,
    binding me downward, forever alone.

    anyway..im here if you ever want to talk, and remember that place needs to be searched...so keep on looking and you'll find it one day!!
    much love xoxo

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I am loving this, which sounds odd giving the content but I think you have worded it so well and made it a little rhythm that I couldn't help it.

    Powerful poem, really representing that loneliness and pain, and feeling so lost and hopeless in the world. Your wording is really great, using words like prison floor, and chains, and empty screams. Each little bit just emphasises that despair you feel.