Dasies or Tulips

by Princess09   Nov 29, 2005


Dew drops on daisies,
Tulips hold tears.
me with out you,
Brings so many fears.

Plant more daisies,
Don't let the tulips live.
Say you won't leave,
And love you will give.

tears will dry up,
Smiles will stay.
If you bring daisies,
On this certain day.

If you bring tulips,
I promise no tears.
But I will miss you,
For the rest of my years.

If you want to leave,
You should go gracefully.
I will smile for you,
And love you eturnally.

Meet me tomorrow,
At that one place,
Where we first met,
So I can see your face.

Bring daisies,
If you love me too.
And bring tulips,
If you love someone new.

2/19/05
11/28/05
**I wrote this a long time ago, but recently revised it. To the love of my life, i'll love you always and forever!!**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Awesome poem.

    And love you eturnally.

    Eternally not Eturnally

    I loved the rhymes again here, they were impressive!

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow, that was good and i agree with Jen, the way you tied up nature with love was absolutely awesome
    so beautiful, keep writing
    xxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    This is another poem that made me cry... omg... you are such a great/ talented writer... the love of my life brought me tulips :( *tear tear* oh well i'll get over it someday.. anyways i love this poem... seriously your like an awesome writer... your gunna win something one day.. anyways 5/5 -Jen-

    PS i love the way you tied nature in with the poem... i like to do that with my poems occasionally too.

  • 18 years ago

    by eric

    Thats an amazing poem good job! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Super job, I really liked it.

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