Comments : Dasies or Tulips

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Aww, I thought that was really sweet. It reminded me of the whole roses are red violets are blue thing, but soo much better and deeper meaning. I love how you brought flowers into this, it was original and i enjoyed it. Nice job!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard

    Wow i totally get the meaning of this poem like tulips are a sign of i just wanna be friends and the other is like i love you

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Awe i really liked this poem... it was so cute and sweet and very well written... very nice job... i'm going to read some more of your stuff.. i hope they are all this good...

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is quite a unique way to write a love poem - I liked how you kept the imagery of the flowers going.
    I'd suggest changing a couple of the lines because they sound like forced rhyming, and this destracts from the poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    You can definitely use my poem, as long as you give me recognition. That is such a compliment, thank you! :)

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    I love how you made this like a metaphor...? I forget what it's called, haha.
    This poem makes me happy.
    It shows you what love is really all about.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Morgan~*~

    Aw thats such a cute and good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Oh my god, this poem is amazing! I was like in tears! I started listening to the song Wish You Were Her by Sparklehorse just as I started to read this, and the into for the song went so perfectly with this poem, it was weird.. Lol. Excellent poem. 5/5 forsure.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Super job, I really liked it.

  • 18 years ago

    by eric

    Thats an amazing poem good job! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    This is another poem that made me cry... omg... you are such a great/ talented writer... the love of my life brought me tulips :( *tear tear* oh well i'll get over it someday.. anyways i love this poem... seriously your like an awesome writer... your gunna win something one day.. anyways 5/5 -Jen-

    PS i love the way you tied nature in with the poem... i like to do that with my poems occasionally too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow, that was good and i agree with Jen, the way you tied up nature with love was absolutely awesome
    so beautiful, keep writing
    xxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Awesome poem.

    And love you eturnally.

    Eternally not Eturnally

    I loved the rhymes again here, they were impressive!

    Peace. [Sole]