A Special World

by Josh   Nov 29, 2005


A special world a special place
Void of problems, time, and space
A place to be happy and never be sad
A place without anything driving you mad
A place that is reserved just for two
Reserved for the love between me and you
A place without worries, a place without pain
A place not to fancy, actually plain
A place where all that matters is love
Flying so free like an elegant dove
I wish so bad that that place could exist
With all of my heart, I don't ever jest
And just think if we could live in that one special world
Together, me and you giving it a twirl
Taking a risk, taking a chance
Almost as if in an embarrassing dance
Living in that place of perfection and right
I wish that we could with all of my might
To live in this place so good and so true
We'd never worry about what not to do
We wouldn't feel grief, or pain, or sorrow
All that would matter is your love on the morrow
And though this world seems so strong and so sure
Its actually fragile, soft, insecure
Easily broken by two main
It was you who chose to unleash the pain
You cannot destroy something so beautiful and pure
And so I'll wait in that one special place
Covering the tears that roll down my face
In that special world that has faded away
Leaving no trace of the tears on my face.......

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe Josh I like this poem very much. I know what you are going through, at least something good like this comes out of something not so great. Loved it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Amazing josh...truly brilliant
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow. Excellent work Josh. Very well done.

    I love the idea of that special world. Oh ye, it would be so good.

    I wish there was a place like that lol.

    Very well done. You got me caged in that dream haha. Too bad I have to get out of it an face reality.

    Keep up the good work Josh,
    Lotsa love,
    -xxx-
    Mona

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, that was fantastic. absolutely fantastic. you're a great poet.
    good ending, good beginning, good
    title, good rhyme. everything was
    perfect or at least I think so.
    take care,
    marjan