Lost path!!!!

by Cheyanne   Nov 29, 2005


At often times i reminace on all the memories we use to share,
and in the cloud thats lost in thought my eyes begin to stare

stare into a world that used to be there-which included you and me,
but somehow along destinys path we lost what used to be

but i never believed at all that loneliness and sadness would take its toll,
because i always believed we were meant to be....you filled my lonely soul

why couldn't we stay the way we were, why did fate have to tare us apart,
i did everything i could to hold us together, i loved you with every peice of my heart

and now all thats left is memories and the past thats no longer there,
and the beautiful world im thinking of....you know the one we used to share

but although we lost destinys path, theres a path you followed from the start,
and thats the path you still walk upon......you know the one that leads to my heart!!!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rich

    Hey - what a terrific poem! I'm always looking to see what you'll write next. You're on my favorites!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chit Cyn

    Very warm and touching. We, women are so emotional than men and at times they dont see it. The message in this poem was related to the readers so concretely that it took just one reading to understand the thoughts invoked. It doesnt need hardcore, dense literature to make the poem shine, as long as the feelings are drawn and the message flows smoothly for readers of all ages to comprehend, a piece of write is at its finest, a work of progress. I love your style, free-verse but proportionate in all accounts. U go poetess, ur pen can move mountains.
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  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I really liked this poem, so keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Yet again... i'm returning the favor... ;D this is a beautiful piece of poetry. i can relate to it a lot... i especiallyl like how you phrased the poem! keep up that great work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by UnspokenDream

    Woo Go Shyan! :D Great Poem
    C ya L8r Hun
    Jay

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